posted 06-17-2000 11:03 PM            

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this isprobably my 3rd post on this subject about me wanting to be a famous singer. finally i have a wav of me.. check it out : http://www.gurlpages.com/other/lentina/images/whatusee.wav
~* its britneyspears what u see is what u get.. sorry about the long download time *~
critizen, comments, praises, etc.. would be helpful.. please help me find my big break!~

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"you know its true love when he is the last thought you think when you go to bed, and hes the first thought u think when u wake up"

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posted 06-18-2000 12:57 AM            

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it only took about 2 seconds to download on my computer, actually.. your melody is good (i mean, you're in tune) but your voice sounds a little thin. it could be the quality of the sound file, though.

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posted 06-18-2000 04:14 AM            

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your okay, just you need to be a little louder.

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posted 06-18-2000 04:38 AM            

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i sing pretty loud, but its the way it was recorded.. its the quality of it :P

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"you know its true love when he is the last thought you think when you go to bed, and hes the first thought u think when u wake up"

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posted 06-18-2000 06:43 AM            

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its ok, but when " i could be nobody else " that sounds kinda weird.

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posted 06-19-2000 01:16 PM            

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To me it sounds like you are trying to make is sounds more musical; long octaves. More than the pop, loud blunt sounds. Or maybe that is what she sounds like, I've never heard B.S. sing that song. Also, before you sing, warm-up your voice by starting down in low pitches and going up to high ones, and all in the middle. It sounded like your voice was straining to reach some of those pitches...

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posted 06-19-2000 01:30 PM            

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I think the beginning of the song was good. But I could hear you striving to reach the higher notes after that, and you carry your notes longer than usual pop songs... but I haven't heard that song before. Overall, I thought it was good :P

urban fire: "Kryptonite" is an awesome song

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posted 06-19-2000 09:24 PM            

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Klumsygirl: We think alike, and yes Kryptonite is an awesome song.

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i'll keep you by my side with my super human..my kryptonite...

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posted 06-20-2000 04:15 AM            

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Urban fire: I love Kryptonite, but aren't the words "I'll keep you by my side with my superhuman might....kryptonite" ?

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