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sour girl
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posted 06-06-2000 11:20 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for sour girl   Click Here to Email sour girl     Edit/Delete Message
hi. im really bored. so heres a poem that i wrote. yay.

Defiance

Sitting beneath the old, shady tree,
I let my mind go. Free to soar amidst
The open blue sky, free to fly with the
Black crows, spiraling above.

And if this freeness came with the soft
Rustling of the chartreuse leaves in the
Tree above, the clarity must have come
With the piercing caw of the crow.

The crow shattered my blurred visions
And made my mind feel like a trickling,
Mountain spring, free of the wastes
Of humanity.

But without those such wastes,
The toxins of greed and vanity,
What would we be? You cannot
Have the dark without the light.

Just by accepting does not erase
The attempts of defiance I will
Make. And I will strive for a piece
Of that clarity, that sweet gift of
Clarity, given to me selflessly
By the piercing caw of the crow.

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i am not daft, i am insane.

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klumsygirl
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posted 06-07-2000 12:51 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for klumsygirl   Click Here to Email klumsygirl     Edit/Delete Message
Hey! I love reading poems... especially good ones, like yours. hehe, I'm jealous. :P

Is there a hidden meaning in there?

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Crzy4roswell
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posted 06-07-2000 07:09 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for Crzy4roswell   Click Here to Email Crzy4roswell     Edit/Delete Message
Wow that is a really nice poem. Awesome job!

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KoRnKittie
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posted 06-07-2000 07:46 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for KoRnKittie   Click Here to Email KoRnKittie     Edit/Delete Message
Great poem!

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sour girl
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posted 06-07-2000 04:21 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for sour girl   Click Here to Email sour girl     Edit/Delete Message
thanks.
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klumsygirl, i dunno, maybe theres a hidden meaning! its one of those things you just can explain...

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sour girl
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posted 06-07-2000 04:24 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for sour girl   Click Here to Email sour girl     Edit/Delete Message
whoops i double posted. but i meant cant not can in the above post

[This message has been edited by sour girl (edited 06-07-2000).]

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junglistica
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posted 06-07-2000 05:03 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for junglistica   Click Here to Email junglistica     Edit/Delete Message
ah that was so good!!

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